gre写作例子：GRE作文范文大全（133）

Gre写作是美国所有作文考试中时刻最长而质量要求最高的一类作文考试，而在短期内提高gre写作能力不是一天两天可以完成额，所以我们在备考2011新gre写作时必然要对问题问题深切的剖析，体味以下优异范文的文章结构，以提高新gre写作的整体分数。

Finally, the survey results as reported by the speaker are too vague to support any firm

conclusion. The speaker reports that Sanlee students receive lower grades and are more likely

to repeat a school year then Marlee students. Yet the speaker does not indicate whether this

fact applies to Sanlee and Marlee students generally, or just to math and science students.

The speaker's recommendation for all high school students might be defensible in the former

case, but not in the latter case.

In conclusion, the recommendation that all high school students be assigned homework

once per week at most is indefensible based on the evidence. To strengthen the argument, the

speaker must show that the reported correlation in the areas of math and science is also found

among most other academic subjects. The speaker must also rule out other factors that might

determine the students' grades and their likelihood of repeating a year. Finally, to better assess

the argument we would need to know whether the reported disparity in academic performance

between Sanlee and Marlee students involved only math and science students or all students.

Argument 82

A recent study suggests that people who are left-handed are more likely to succeed in

business than are right-handed people. Researchers studied photographs of 1,000 prominent

business executives and found that 21 percent of these executives wrote with their left hand.

So the percentage of prominent business executives who are left-handed (21 percent) is

almost twice the percentage of people in the general population who are left-handed (11

percent). Thus, people who are left-handed would be well advised to pursue a career in

business, whereas people who are right-handed would be well advised to imitate the business

practices exhibited by left-handers.

This argument recommends the all left-handed people should pursue a career in business

and that right-handed people should learn to imitate the business practices of left-handed

people. To support this recommendation the speaker cites a study of 1,000 prominent

business executives, among whom 21 percent were photographed while writing with their left

hand. The speaker then points out that only 11 percent of the general population is left-handed. 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全（133） 》一文，查字典出国留学网()编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。Gre写作是美国所有作文考试中时刻最长而质量要求最高的一类作文考试，而在短期内提高gre写作能力不是一天两天可以完成额，所以我们在备考2011新gre写作时必然要对问题问题深切的剖析，体味以下优异范文的文章结构，以提高新gre写作的整体分数。

The argument suffers from several logical flaws and is therefore unconvincing.

First of all, the study amounts to scant evidence of the speaker's implicit condusion that

left-handedness contributes to business success. Just because photographs show a person

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writing with his or her left hand does not necessarily mean that the person is left-handed; many

people are ambidextrous--using either hand to write or using one hand to write while using the

other hand for other tasks. Besides, the 1,000 executives from the study are not necessarily

representative of the overall population of prominent business executives. Moreover, many

prominent executives might have risen to their status not by way of their achievements or

business acumen but through other means--such as familial relationships. In short, the

photographs in themselves prove little about the causal relationship between left-handedness

and the ability to succeed in business.

Even if left-handed people are more likely to have an innate ability to succeed in business

than right-handed people are, the author's conclusion that all left-handed people should

pursue business careers unfairly assumes that all left-handed people are similar in terms of

their talents, interests, and motivations. Common sense informs me that the best vocational

choice for any person depends on a variety of factors. Thus without dearer evidence that

left-handed people tend to be successful in business but unsuccessful in other vocations the

speaker cannot justify such a sweeping recommendation for left-handed people.

Even if most left-handed people would be well advised to pursue business careers, the

speaker's recommendation for right-handed people is unwarranted. Common sense informs

me that any innate business acumen with which left-handed people might be endowed cannot

be imitated. Moreover, the speaker assumes without substantiation that the way in which

left-handed people conduct business is the only way to succeed in business. It is entirely

possible that right-handed people have certain natural ways of thinking which lend themselves

better to other business approaches. Without considering and ruling out this possibility the

speaker cannot convince me that right-handed people should imitate the business practices of

left-handed people. 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全（133） 》一文，查字典出国留学网()编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。Gre写作是美国所有作文考试中时刻最长而质量要求最高的一类作文考试，而在短期内提高gre写作能力不是一天两天可以完成额，所以我们在备考2011新gre写作时必然要对问题问题深切的剖析，体味以下优异范文的文章结构，以提高新gre写作的整体分数。

In sum, the argument is logically unsound. To strengthen it the speaker must show that the

1,000 executives in the photos were in fact using their dominant hand, that they are

representative of all prominent executives, and that prominence in business is generally the

result of an executive's business practices. To better assess the argument I would need to

compare the percentage of left-handed people who succeed in business with those who

succeed in other vocations. I would also need more information about the business practices

of left-handed people to determine whether they employ similar practices, and whether

right-handed people who have succeeded in business employ different practices.

Argument 83

The following is a letter from an editor at Liber Publishing Company to the company's

president.

"In recent years, Liber has unfortunately moved away from its original mission: to publish the

works of regional small-town authors instead of those of big-city authors. Just last year, 90

percent of the novels we published were written by authors who maintain a residence in a big

city. Although this change must have been intended to increase profits, it has obviously

backfired, because Liber is now in serious financial trouble. The only way to address this

problem is to return to our original mission. If we return to publishing only the works of regional

small-town authors, our financial troubles will soon be resolved."

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An editor at Liber Publishing contends here that Liber will become profitable again if and

only it returns to its original mission of publishing works primarily by small-town authors. To

support this contention the editor cites the fact that since moving away from that mission Liber

has become unprofitable. The editor's argument suffers from a series of logical problems, and

is therefore wholly unpersuasive. 感谢您阅读《GRE作文范文大全（133） 》一文，查字典出国留学网()编辑部希望本文能帮助到您。

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