托福写作语料库

友谊类：

The friends that you can have fun with are more important than the friends that you can get help from? 你喜欢交可以给你带来快乐的朋友还是可以帮助你的朋友?

主题观点：对比可以带来欢乐的朋友，我喜欢结交可以患难与共的朋友。

布局图：

首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点+作家立场

二段：第一个论据的展开：细节支持 + 数据的支持

三段：第二个论据的展开：讲故事(我自己的故事;我同学的故事：叔叔的故事)

四段：让步段：幽默的朋友也有利好

尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由

原创语料库：

1. A close and congenial friend is what every individual aspires after. 拥有亲密无间的和志同道合的朋友是人人都渴望的。

2. A day without friendship is like a day without sunshine. 没有友谊的生活就像是没有阳光的生活。

4. Those who can go through thick and thin together with you 那些可以和你风雨同舟的人(作家文采)

6. a humorous friend = a friend with great sense of humor n 一个幽默的朋友

7. enjoy wonderful time together = have fun together v一起享受欢乐时光

8. sincere friends n真诚的朋友

9. intimate friends n亲密的朋友

10. bosom friends n密友;知己

11. Prosperity helps us make friends， however，adversity helps us try them. 富贵易交友，患难见真情。(作家观点)

13. The most essential standard to judge a true friend is whether he or she will provide us with timely support in time of plight. 判断好友的最重要的标准就是，是否他或她愿意在逆境中给我们提供及时的帮助(观点总结)

14. Whenever I run into unexpected adverse circumstances， it is Sandy that provides me with emotional support and spiritual consolation. 无论何时我遇到意想不到的困境，Sandy 总是可以给我提供情感支持和精神安慰。(例证支持)

15. I believe true friend can surpass the age limitation. I always take my father as my trustworthy friend from whom I really benefit a great deal. 我相信好友是超越年龄的限制，我一直认为爸爸是值得信赖的朋友，从他身上我获益良多。(细节展开)

16. This debate reminds me of the experience of striving for attending my dream graduate school. After failing the exam for two times, I thought of giving up halfway, however, my father provided me with an ocean of assistance both financially and spiritually. 话题使我联想起我为考研奋斗的经历，两次尝试失败过后，我曾经想过放弃，但是，我的爸爸给我提供了经济和精神方面的巨大的支持。(细节展开)

17. Instead of curling into a ball beneath the table， I ended up mustering up my courage, learning from my failure and marching courageously towards the next opportunity. 我没有蜷缩成球，藏在桌下， 相反，我最终鼓起勇气， 从失败中学习，为争取下次机会努力前行(作家文采)

18. A humorous friend can never fail to help us to see the sunny side, especially when we feel frustrated and depressed. 幽默的朋友可以帮助我们看到积极的一面，尤其是当我们感到沮丧和挫败的时候。

19. A humorous friend can, to large extent, help us remain cheerful in time of adversity. 富有幽默感的朋友，可以在很大程度上帮助我们在逆境中保持乐观情绪。

20. Opting for friends who are willing to give unselfish help outshines choosing friends with whom we can feel the sense of humor. 选择愿意慷慨相助的朋友胜过了选择可以给让我们带来幽默的朋友.